003: Accidental Video

[believemyvoice]

[This video seems to be of a class session. Tokiya is standing by his desk, singing.]

[After he finishes his song, he takes his seat again. The video continues until the end of class, containing other less impressive students singing and some music theory. He'll reply to comments after class is over.

OOC Note: This video is just to show which song he sings, how the classrooms look, and how he sings. It's not from this actual moment in the series.]

Comments

[omnomsgods]

To get better. For one thing, your breathing in between phrases is too noticeable. Depending on the song it can be a good thing, but not in the one you just sang. For another, your voice sounds too... uh, subdued- it's not strong enough on its own, but putting a harmony to it wouldn't do a lotta help, either. You also sing too focused on yourself. You gotta listen for more cues around you to work with so you can change here and there. Those are just off the top of my head, though.

[believemyvoice]

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[The screen cuts off. Yes, he just disconnected this conversation! D:<]

[omnomsgods]

[ well geeze someone can't take criticism well.

oh well. she'll simply stare at a blank screen for a moment before actually going to do her job. ]